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Assertion-Evidence Slides: Structure, Real Examples and a Template

Assertion-evidence slides replace a topic phrase and bullets with a full-sentence headline and one piece of visual evidence, backed by Penn State research.

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Most slides follow the same default structure without anyone choosing it deliberately: a short topic phrase at the top, a bulleted list underneath.

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Most slides follow the same default structure without anyone choosing it deliberately: a short topic phrase at the top, a bulleted list underneath. "Q3 Sales." Four bullets. Assertion-evidence slides replace both halves. The headline becomes a full sentence stating the actual finding, and the bullets are replaced by one piece of visual evidence, usually a chart, that backs the sentence up directly. The structure comes from Michael Alley's work at Penn State, developed with funding from the National Science Foundation. The core claim is specific and testable: audiences shown assertion-evidence slides understood and remembered the content better than audiences shown the same spoken material with conventional topic-and-bullets slides. A study led by Garner and colleagues in 2013 found that difference to be statistically significant. A separate study, in 2016, found that presenters themselves developed a deeper understanding of their own material when they built assertion-evidence slides, compared to building a conventional topic-and-bullets deck covering the identical content. The mechanic is simple to describe and harder to practise. Start with a full sentence, not a phrase: "Q3 revenue hit 108 million euros, up 12. 5 percent on Q2," not "Q3 Sales Overview." Then pick one piece of visual evidence, a single chart or image, that supports that exact sentence, and remove everything else competing for attention on the slide: no starburst badge, no second chart making a different point, no bulleted caveats underneath. A useful test for whether a slide actually follows this structure: read only the headline aloud, then look at the slide from across a room, blurred enough that the fine detail disappears. If the headline alone states the finding, and the blurred slide still shows one dominant shape that matches it, the slide is doing its job. If the eye lands on a logo or a decorative shape instead, the assertion and the evidence have lost the argument to whatever else is competing for attention. The squint test below runs exactly that experiment on three real slide designs.

Most slides follow a default structure nobody consciously chose: a short topic phrase at the top, a bulleted list underneath. “Q3 Sales Overview.” Four bullets summarising the quarter. Assertion-evidence slides replace both halves of that default at once, and the case for doing so is backed by actual published research, not just a stylistic preference.

Assertion-evidence slides: the structure, stated plainly

An assertion-evidence slide pairs two elements and nothing more. The headline is a complete sentence stating the specific finding, not a topic label pointing vaguely at a subject: “Q3 revenue hit €108m, up 12.5% on Q2” rather than “Q3 Sales Overview.” Below it sits one piece of visual evidence, usually a single chart, diagram or image, chosen specifically because it supports that exact sentence rather than the general topic. Everything else that would normally compete for attention on a slide, decorative badges, a second chart making an unrelated point, a bulleted list of caveats, gets removed rather than added underneath.

The bulleted list is the harder habit to break, because it feels like thoroughness rather than clutter while it’s being built. A list of four sub-points under a topic phrase asks the audience to read and synthesise the actual finding themselves, in real time, while also listening to whatever the presenter is saying out loud. A single sentence headline does that synthesis for them, once, before the audience has to do any work at all.

Where the research comes from

The assertion-evidence approach was developed and researched by Michael Alley at Penn State’s Leonhard Center, with funding that has included a National Science Foundation grant. This is not merely one professor’s stylistic opinion dressed up as a methodology; it is an actively researched claim with published, testable results behind it.

A study led by Garner and colleagues in 2013 compared audiences who watched identical spoken content delivered with two different slide formats, conventional topic-and-bullets slides against assertion-evidence slides. The audiences who saw assertion-evidence slides understood and remembered the material better, a difference the researchers reported as statistically significant. A separate 2016 study by the same research group looked at the effect on presenters rather than audiences, and found that people who built their own slides using the assertion-evidence structure developed a deeper understanding of their material in the process of building it, compared to presenters who built a conventional deck covering the same content. A more recent 2023 study, led by Wolfe and colleagues, extended the research further, finding that the same underlying multimedia-learning principles hold even when the audience is made up of experts hearing advanced material, not just students in a classroom.

Building one, step by step

Start from the sentence, not the slide. Write down the single finding a slide needs to communicate, in full-sentence form, before opening any design software at all. If that sentence can’t be written cleanly, the slide isn’t ready to be built yet, regardless of what chart or image might eventually sit underneath it.

Next, choose exactly one piece of visual evidence that supports that sentence directly. A sorted bar chart showing regional sales supports “Region three grew fastest this quarter.” A line chart with a clear inflection point supports “Churn fell after the March onboarding change.” The evidence should be chosen the same way a lawyer picks an exhibit: because it proves the specific claim being made, not because it happens to be the most interesting chart available from the same dataset.

Finally, remove anything on the slide that isn’t the headline or the evidence. That includes decorative shapes, secondary charts, and bulleted context that belongs in speech rather than on the screen. A slide with one sentence and one chart, and genuinely nothing else competing with them, is the target shape.

A simple template, and a worked example

The template underneath all of this is short enough to write on an index card: one sentence stating the finding, in the header position; one chart, diagram or image beneath it that proves that sentence; nothing else on the slide competing with either. Filling that template in is where most of the actual work happens, and it helps to see it applied to a real document rather than a hypothetical one.

EY’s 2015 report on the sharing economy sorts the field into four categories, one of which, recirculation of goods, it traces back to platforms like eBay and Craigslist emerging in the 1990s. A conventional slide built from that report would likely carry the topic phrase “Categories of the Sharing Economy” over four bullets, one per category. An assertion-evidence version of the same content picks one category to make the point with rather than listing all four at once: “Recirculation of goods is the sharing economy’s oldest category, dating to 1990s platforms like eBay,” paired with a single timeline graphic showing that category’s platforms against the newer ones EY documents elsewhere in the same report. The full four-category breakdown still exists, just spread across four slides instead of stacked into one, each one making its own specific, evidenced claim instead of all four sharing one crowded topic slide between them.

Testing a finished slide: the squint test

A useful check for whether an assertion-evidence slide is actually working, rather than merely following the format on paper, is to blur it from across a room, or squint at it from a few feet back, and ask what the eye lands on first. On a working slide, the answer is the headline, then the one piece of evidence beneath it, because together they are the largest and most visually dominant elements on the page. On a slide that has drifted back toward the old default, a logo, a decorative shape or an oversized brand mark often wins that contest instead, even with a proper sentence headline technically sitting above it.

The squint test below runs exactly this experiment on three different slide designs covering the same underlying finding, a churn number that fell over six months, with a slider that blurs each one progressively. It is a fast, visual way to catch the gap between a slide that follows the assertion-evidence rules on paper and one that actually earns the reader’s attention in practice, which is ultimately the only test that matters.

Where this fits with the rest of slide design

Assertion-evidence slides solve a structural problem, one assertion, one piece of evidence, nothing competing with either. They don’t automatically solve chart selection or chart honesty on their own: a beautifully structured assertion-evidence slide can still carry a chart with a cut axis, or the wrong chart type for what the data actually needs to show. The which chart should I use guide and the misleading graph lesson cover exactly that layer, and a genuinely strong assertion-evidence slide needs both: a structure built around one message, and a piece of evidence that is itself chosen and drawn honestly.

Three designs, one blur slider

Three designs of the same slide. Drag the blur slider up and ask one question for each: which element does the eye land on first? If the answer is not the message, the design is working against the speaker.

Churn update Monthly churn has been reviewed for thefirst half of the year. After the changeto onboarding in March, fewer customerscancelled in their first month. The ratewent from 7.1% in January to 4.0% in June,which is the lowest level on record. 7.1 Jan 6.8 Feb 6.9 Mar 5.2 Apr 4.4 May 4.0 Jun Source: customer database, January to June Acme

Design A · Everything equal

Where does the eye land?

Nowhere in particular. Blurred, the slide turns into an even grey texture: the title, the paragraph and the chart all have the same weight and tone, so nothing leads. The eye drifts to the biggest block, the paragraph, which is the least useful part.

ACME Churn fell to 4% Monthly churn has been reviewed for thefirst half of the year. After the changeto onboarding in March, fewer customers

Design B · Loud decoration

Where does the eye land?

The orange shape and the logo. They are the largest, brightest and most saturated things on the slide, so they win even at full blur. The actual finding, "churn fell to 4%", is small and low in the corner, and disappears first.

Churn fell to 4% after the onboarding change Jan Feb Mar Apr May Jun 4.0% Monthly churn, % of customers, January to June

Design C · Clear hierarchy

Where does the eye land?

The headline, then the purple bar. The message is the largest, darkest element, and the only coloured bar marks the month it talks about. Blurred, you still see a big dark line of text above a row of bars with one standing out, which is the whole story.

Your turn

Test one of your own slides. Export it as an image, then choose the file or paste it here. The image stays in this browser tab; nothing is uploaded. Without this tool the same test works by stepping two metres back from the screen or half-closing your eyes.

Questions

What is an assertion-evidence slide?

A slide built around a full-sentence headline stating one finding (the assertion) paired with a single piece of visual evidence, usually a chart or image, that supports it directly, replacing the more common topic-phrase-plus-bulleted-list structure.

Who developed the assertion-evidence approach?

Michael Alley, working from Penn State's Leonhard Center, developed and researched the approach, with funding that has included a National Science Foundation grant. The research has continued in multiple published studies since.

Is there research showing assertion-evidence slides actually work better?

Yes. A 2013 study led by Garner and colleagues found audiences understood and remembered assertion-evidence slides better than conventional slides carrying identical spoken content, a statistically significant result. A 2016 study found presenters who built assertion-evidence slides developed deeper understanding of their own material.

What's an example of turning a topic phrase into an assertion?

"Q3 Sales Overview" becomes "Q3 revenue hit €108m, up 12.5% on Q2." The topic phrase names a subject; the assertion states the actual finding a reader would otherwise have to dig out of the bullets and chart below it.

How much visual evidence should one assertion-evidence slide carry?

One piece, deliberately. A single chart, diagram or image that supports the headline directly. Adding a second chart making a separate point, or decorative elements unrelated to the assertion, dilutes the one message the slide is built to carry.

Does the assertion-evidence structure work for every kind of presentation?

It fits best where a presenter is arguing a specific point per slide, which covers most technical, business and research presentations. A reference document meant to be scanned rather than presented, or a slide meant only to introduce a section, may not need a full assertion-evidence treatment.

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Question 01 of 05

What replaces the topic phrase in an assertion-evidence slide?

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B · A full-sentence headline stating the actual findingInstead of a short topic phrase like 'Q3 Sales,' the headline becomes a complete sentence stating the finding directly, such as 'Q3 revenue hit €108m, up 12.5% on Q2.'

Question 02 of 05

What replaces the bulleted list in an assertion-evidence slide?

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B · One piece of visual evidence, such as a single chart, that supports the headlineThe structure pairs one assertion with one piece of visual evidence, rather than a list of supporting sub-points in text.

Question 03 of 05

Where was the assertion-evidence research primarily conducted?

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B · Penn State, led by Michael Alley, with NSF fundingMichael Alley led the assertion-evidence research at Penn State's Leonhard Center, funded in part by a National Science Foundation grant.

Question 04 of 05

What did Garner and colleagues find in their 2013 study?

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B · Audiences understood and remembered content better with assertion-evidence slides than with conventional slides, a statistically significant differenceThe 2013 study found a statistically significant improvement in audience comprehension and recall for assertion-evidence slides over conventional topic-and-bullets slides carrying the same spoken content.

Question 05 of 05

What does the squint test check on an assertion-evidence slide?

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B · Whether, blurred from a distance, the eye still lands on the message rather than a decorative elementBlurring a slide removes fine detail and reveals which element is visually dominant; on a working assertion-evidence slide, that should be the headline and its supporting evidence, not a logo or decoration.